Saturday, October 11, 2008

... WHY I DON'T ..??..

I don't remember her ,
But my loneliness reminds me of her ,
With so many pals alltogether ,i am n'er a solitary soul,
But i am , when she is standing aside ,
Who says she is standing aside !??
Despite being so far , she's always sitting beside,
But if she is always sitting beside ,
Then why don't I REMEMBER her ?

I don't have love and care for her ,
But my heart melt n eyes get wet at her grief ,
IT's goodness of her nature which compells my heart to ,
Her nature is not good at all ,
But better than the nature's nature ,
Who always plays in favour of its creature ,
But then why don't i LOVE her ??

I don't wanna see her ,
But eager are my eyes to have a glimpse of her ,
They'll not find her anywhere ,they know,
They keep searching for her ,though ,
Don't know why my eyes always keep looking for ugly face ,
As ugly as the ANGELS of fairy tales ,
But then why don't i want to SEE her ???

I have a bunch of hatred in my heart for her ,
But it's very ungratefull to hate such a helpfull one ,
She is not at all a helpfull soul ,
But she helped me once to breathe ,more than once ! ,
How can anyone help me to breathe ,
I was breathing on my own ,but she helped me a lot,
But then again ,Why do i HATE her ????

18 comments:

david santos said...

Really beautiful! Pretty imagination!!! Have a nice day.

R@|-||_||_ $ING|-| said...

thnks a lot for ur compliments but can u tell me who r u ??
i m asking cuz i hav n'er heard this name..

sakshi said...

rahul,the way u frame those beautiful words is pretty awsum!!

lookin forward to more of ur creations!
:)

R@|-||_||_ $ING|-| said...

thnks a lot sakshi !!!
:)

Rajneesh searching for authentication..... said...

yaar brilliant...except this nothing i can say for it..keep on exploring more depth...

R@|-||_||_ $ING|-| said...

thnks sethji !!
he he..

ansh said...

awsome yaar

david santos said...

Hello, my friend! Have a nice week.

neetu said...

hey....wow yaar, nice poem....i was not aware of ur this hidden talent....keep it up...[:)]

R@|-||_||_ $ING|-| said...

thnks..

siddharth said...

gud lord!!never knew u were so gud...u sound like a total hrt broken romeo..lol..its awesome..

R@|-||_||_ $ING|-| said...

chup sale..
its nothing lik that..

R@|-||_||_ $ING|-| said...

chup sale..
its nothing lik that..

siddharth said...

wht ever....i know the truth....

Divya said...

Rahul,
Ur poetry is mind blowing...
The way u express it is simply superb!!

R@|-||_||_ $ING|-| said...

thnks a lot divya..

devil said...

hey, its a good one.........and im not so bad........and i visited ur blog.......sorry 4being so rude...as i cant trust strangers

R@|-||_||_ $ING|-| said...

no probs..
thnks a lot for ur comments..